Reviews for Bethrothed |
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![]() ![]() Wow this is awesome. Continue soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Alexandra. That's strange! Poor Elena. Why does Darius wants to marry her? She not yet matured and only just seventeen years old. What about Darius? so Alexandra had go to america and attend the best university in world and become engaged to Darius? Why does Darius was angry to Lucan? Hurry update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Write more soon please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an interesting story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! So Darius and Alexandra like each other. What about Elena? I can't wait to see who will get married? Poor Alexandra. I wonder what happened if Darius and she's relationship develop more strong and more love later on. Hurry update soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg Please Update fast! It's getting so good! Is it going to be rated R? I must know! |
![]() ![]() ![]() another nice chapter. love it. keep up the good work update son |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG You need to update fast! I must know what happens! It was getting good to! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon! I want to know what happens. Is this story going to be rated R in later chapters? Just wanting to know because your other work was R that's why I'm asking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey it's Beauitful Witch Hunter Robin from fanfiction. Ah, it sucks you had to move your stories here. Sorry I wasn't around to read your other 3 chapters. As you know I hope, Hurricane Frances hit the east coast of FL, Martin County, Port. St. Lucie, Fort Peirce, Vero Beach, Palm beach, ect. I live in Martin County and was hit with outer eye wall and the eye...which was good for several hours and I was without power...the poles will distroyed, snapped in half and hanging off corners for about 6 days...it sucked! I was without cable internet for 14 days and that sucked more! I did lose a lot in that hurricane and I'm slowly getting back on my feet to normal but that will take a while knowing hurricane season has another two months. I hate living in FLORIDA! I'm back and will be reviewing more often now that I have computer! Oh, one more thing why don't you use their real names? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story I hope you update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's so good! But u should have made it where lucan got the shit beat out of him. update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it! update or die! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it. I have to say I love hohrses and I like Italy. It's a very good start. keep up the good work. Update soon. |