Reviews for Yours to Keep
WiredWords chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
very few people have the right way with words to handle the topic of sex and romance. some are too cliche and some too erotic. this paints a clear, yet foggy and mysterious picture. all at the same time. nice.
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 4/29/2005
This is such a beautiful and passionate piece. I think the very images and feelings it evokes can make anyone wish to have someone they love in their arms. Great flow and the emotions of desire are loud in this poem. Bravo to you.
kit feral chapter 1 . 12/19/2004
Oh, wow, intense! Nice emotion! I really enjoyed it! Good work!