|Reviews for Fear|
| IndigoDream chapter 1 . 2/21/2006
Nice poem, just a bit of constructive criticism. First of all, you shouldn't have said in the summary that the fear was revealed in the last two lines, because it made me read the last two lines first, which ruined the poem for me. Also, the last four lines could be combined into two lines I think- right now they are a bit redundant.
Really nice imagery and language though, and overall a good poem. Well done!
| Kayokeo chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
It was pretty good it was just a little short wasnt very, it didnt have depth it didn't really catch your attention but it was good.