|Reviews for Night|
| Selena Benilo chapter 1 . 7/9/2006
I don't remember this one; it's pretty old. Almost a year, yes? I really thought it was good. Nice job, Akira. :).
I'm surprised you haven't posted anything new.
| Sparlight chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
Here I like most the fact that you ended it with "there's no relief". The brevity of the poem surprised me a little. You have a great grasp of economy of word, using only the best and most descriptive ones to associate your night demons with. A short and engaging read that drew my attention right away. Great job!
P.S.: "Minds" or "Mind's" eye?