Reviews for What Would They Do?
Shadowed Mind chapter 1 . 12/17/2004
i can relate so parents dont know and often i find myself wondering what they would think...which locks me away inside even more...keep writing. lotsa love, miss-fev
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
I knwo what you mean, I can explain away my cuts but simply not answering and no one cares, no one notices really, just a simply 'whats that' they don't even wait for an answer. I love your poem, it brought up a lot of emotion.

Keep it up.
Keith Andrew chapter 1 . 10/28/2004
This is amazing, well and truly amazing, I love it. The imagery in the second half of the poem really brought the poem to life and added a magnificent contrast to the first half that was rife with indecision, about who you could trust with the secret. Great stuff, keep it up
Keith Andrew
Kressida chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
this poem was absolutely amazing! the words flow really good, and it's so full of emotion. i can also relate, you know how much. i loved it alex!
luv Zai
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
The rhythm of the words at the beginning was amazing! I actually know what would happen if your my parents did see...for me it wasn't pretty but it was nice to know that maybe somewhere there is someones parents who will be all nice about it. Anywho the poem was extremely well written and totally a fav if I didn't already reach the maximum.
freak161 chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
fantastic, know exactly how you feel, well written. lost for words on how much i understand what your sayin on the poem. i feel the same. your not alone
lots of love irish_goth