Reviews for Quandaries of a Quirky Romantic
Aretice N. Treader chapter 4 . 11/8/2013
I really enjoy reading about Nadine's family. It makes me wish I could have a family as crazy as that... minus the crazy part. I didn't really see any mistakes, so... Good job!
Aretice N. Treader chapter 3 . 11/8/2013
Thatcher's point of view is... interesting, to say the least. I like the Italian background, too. I found some overused semi-colons, but I don't think those are necessarily mistakes. Just... preference. I still liked this chapter, though.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 2 . 11/7/2013
I like Nadine's family. They seem... interesting, to say the least. There were a couple of mistakes (like writing "no suck luck" instead of "no such luck), but this chapter was still good.
Aretice N. Treader chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
I like the humor in this chapter. It's a nice opening for what seems like a light-hearted story at the moment. I have a tip, but it's really just my style preference. Usually, a word that is meant to show sarcasm is in quotation marks, not apostrophes. So, instead of 'conveniently,' it would be "conveniently." But I don't think it's a big deal when you look at the story as a whole.
Anon chapter 19 . 9/15/2013
I freaking love them! He's so cute and she's so weird and awwwwwwhhh im smiling way too harddd
D chapter 3 . 6/20/2013
Wow... Thatcher really is the bad boy huh? I wonder what is beneath that stony facade of his... And you did get his personality down! He's a total natural; or maybe you're a total natural? Wow, Meghan is really blackmailing him. Interesting. I wonder how the two of them: Thatcher and Nadine will act when they're together... Hm...
Guest chapter 2 . 6/20/2013
Lol, that was funny! I LOVE the trash scene! Even though it's only chapter two, it's so cute! But the thing that turned me off was Thatcher smoking. Other than that, I would have deemed him... hot and chivalrous! I love how she isn't going all mushy/gaga over him. Perfect! Nadine is really funny too. Awesome!
Reviewer chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Hm... I'm wondering whether this is going to be an awesome story where the guy falls in love first. Because it's sounding like that. Or maybe the one where the girl falls in love first? Does it matter? Your summary is great because believe me, I wouldn't be reading this if it wasn't. And since this story is already complete, you probably won't bother with this review but I need inspiration. And so here goes: this story is going to be awesome.
Melly chapter 20 . 5/24/2013
That bitch Nicola still makes me mad and this is not the first time I am reading this but that girl just rubs me the wrong way. I HATE HER
Melly chapter 19 . 5/24/2013
Reading this chapter again for maybe the 4th time and it is more beautiful and wonderful than before. God I love Thatcher and Nadine they seem so real, Secretive you are an amazing writer.
imastranger chapter 26 . 5/3/2013
This is my third or fourth time reading this and I still feel all the emotions that I felt when I first read it. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER, even though sometimes I catch stray grammatical errors.
Ditto123 chapter 2 . 4/16/2013
Oh, I knew that the guy who helped Nadine with her trash was Thatcher!

"I let out a bloodcurdling scream and ducked behind the kitchen counter. Which prompted Mom to scream and since we were screaming, Jasmine (who had been walking by the kitchen) followed suit and screamed.

Talk about the domino effect."

Lmaoo It's been a while since I've found a recent story that can crack a smile out of me. It's pretty hard to get me to laugh, unless it's really, really funny. As in REALLY funny.

Ah, that's kinda like me. If somebody screams, I scream. If somebody cries, I cry. If somebody laughs, I laugh . . . I suck -.-
Ditto123 chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
"She looked like the Cheshire cat from Alice in Wonderland by now" Oh gawd, I am going to remember that! xD

I don't think I've had the pleasure of reading "The Matchmaker's Best Friend" but if it's anything like this, then I am totally going to read it!

This is a pretty funny, interesting, cliche-ish in a sense story. I love Nadine's name, and I think the way she talked about Meghan and Cupid and the God's fear makes the story all the more interesting. It also makes me want to fear and adore Meghan, the former because if she were real I'd probably find her annoying and a pest (I'm being realistic here, don't hate) and the latter because I know that she'll probably make the story even more interesting and funny.

Alright, well I'm a just continue to read. Don't mind me and this silly little review I left.
britishbrunette chapter 1 . 3/24/2013
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Veronica Astoria Hart chapter 26 . 2/3/2013
I must say that this story threw me for a loop. (Is it weird that I'm a romantic like Nadine, who believes they will die alone?) At first, I was "meh" toward you and the story. I thought this would be another pointless cliché that ended like all the others. But then you started with the drama - and used it in an excellent way. I loved your brain for coming up with this fic, loved you more and ended up hating you at the end. (I mean, I love you and the story, but that ending...)

Your flow and wording were awesome, and you manage to convey emotions while keeping your characters in character. I did notice, however, that you have a slight problem with homophones. I saw a lot of "you're" in stead of "your" and "their, there, they're" confusion.

Other than that, the story was perfect! It made laugh and cry! I also like how Matteo and Matthew are friends. And the fact that you don't curse in your stories means a lot to me.

Now onto the sequel!...On second thought, I have to be up in five hours...I'll read it tomorrow.
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