Reviews for Green with Envy
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
I know who this could be describing in my life.. great job.. I loce the last two lines
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
Girlfriend's betrayal,—

Since love is no game or play,

¿Where does true heart lay? —m—
James Noonan chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
very good, i liked the way you emphisised the word someone, keep it up, ps thanks for your review
pointythings chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
This is really pretty. I'm not sure the rhyming really works, but that's ok. It just seems like it's a freestyle. I think you could maybe make more verses, though; it's sort of obscure.
Akio the Dragon Master chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
- i like! very deep i feel hyper... wonder why?
Miya- - -#'Cause you didn't do colorguard practice today and you have a lot of pent up energy 'cause you don't talk or anything during school.
- Oh... Yeah... -