Reviews for Ceremony
Shadowgirl chapter 1 . 5/19/2005
Very nice! I love the last stanza and the ceremonial aspect, that seems like a dirge to the doomed.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
This is quite up my alley, beautifully rendered.
Grim Spirit chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
Wonderful as ever and really interesting.
Grim Spirit.
Ebony Moonlight chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
Immersed in elemental magic. Keep it up!
The One and Only
Emerald164 chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
Beautifully done as well with a wonderful choice of words
InsolventDarkTazz chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
WOW!
That is cool!
Your REALLY REALLY good!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
powerful with beautiful language as always
Demodocus chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
Wow! Short and right to the point! I love the format of this one. You have quite a talent for poetic creativity. Keep writing. Can't really think of anything else to say. Bryan
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
The ocean!
water
me likes alot!
love the imagery too
keep writing!
raven.chole.lee chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
Wow. I really like this one. You have a great way of being able to portray emotions and such into descriptive events. Wonderful.
Keep it going!
R.C.
P.S. If you like, you could out one of my recent ones. Though I'm not sure if they would be to your liking. :)
happy thing chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
*blank stare* wonderful