Reviews for Why Not?
Artificial Refuge chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
You got the feelings across really well in a short piece of writing. It's great work, keep it up.
grim-dreamer chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
Short, which isn't a bad thing. Could be useful on an electrical appliances advert, couldn't it? :)
his-bleeding-heart chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
sometimes shorter stuff like this feels cut off, but this is very self-contained and ends in an angry yell. I like that. Not much more to say really
You're Too Wonderful.