Reviews for Turning Point
Getuie chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
*smiles* I liked it. It's as hard to review as it was for you to give it a description... I like the halts in the flow of the poem... It just fits. And I love the progression throughout, the honesty and then the last stanza with those last three gorgeous lines.
Just one typo in the 4th last line. "Something"