|Reviews for Maybe, Then You'd Love Me|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
What an irony this poem contains dear,
¿Don't you know parents really are perfect?
They should be they've had time to learn it all,
But you can count me out of that total,
I was like that Greek god that born whole,
An apparition entire without youth,
So I've had to make all those mistakes now,
And, maybe that's why I screwed up two times,
& Don't you know they say the third's the charm.
| TickleMeElmo217 chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
so true! i feel like this CONSTANTLY
| Kusje chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
likewise.. man ur really good. keep it up
| karmakaze chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
Half the time, they did act the way you did at your age. I don't think that everyone's parents got straight As and had perfect paper cut-out friends. It's hard for them to let us go, and just to let us develop into a person independent of their wishes and beliefs. My parents are pretty open-minded, but sometimes when you aren't perfect, parents get like that. Hang in there...usually parents and kids have rough times in the teen years, but they become friends again when you get older.
And this is a positive review, BTW, so good job.
| estrela chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
wow! everyone can relate to this - it's so true. sounds like something i would vent! i love it very, very much _
| HeArTbRoKeN922 chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
Good Poem..very sad in a way too...well thanks for the review!
| xXxHopelessRomanticxXx chapter 1 . 9/15/2004
amazing! as i read this chills ran up and down my spine. This is precisely how i feel much of the time. i honestly do not have any critiques, this was outstanding. i don't know what to say except for, wow.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
ah... ouch wow!
| NP user chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
Oh my gosh! That is a beautiful poem! I love it! I can totally relate...my parents they never are happy with anything I do. Again, great job and great poem!
Forever and Always,