Hey babez, I absolutely LOVE this poem! It seems as if you took every emotion I had towards Jerron during that period of my life (which wuz only like wat...3 months ago?) and put it into the words I couldn't get out. I kno exactly how you feel. EXACTLY! It also makes me wanna stab u-kno-who in his eyes! LOL! Well U kno I got u back thru anything (wat r best friends for?) I LOVE YOU!
~ Sammie

Your descriptions of this person's feelings (or maybe they're yours, Im not sure) were good, yet twisted-
"So many times you set my heart ablaze
Yes, with passions flame
The passion of pain" whichmade it much mroe interesting to read. You kept it alive and didn't let this poem die out. Good job

hey, I like this, its original and flows well