Reviews for Lunch
M L chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
fun fun. ..I don't know how to review poems. I like it's pattern/rythym/.. It's v. much like school. Big groups are fun sometimes, but I dissapear to sit with friends.
Kami chapter 1 . 12/31/2004
We're looked down upon? *gets nervous. Pulls out AK47* alright, bring it on... I love that song, by the way... Good choice of, um... like, simular subject matter and... um... yeah, you get what I'm saying...
Amora Elvenstar chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
And this clearly shows the separations and groups that we all have at schools. Very nice way to put it. Glad you sit with the minority. I don't want you to start acting like the majority. ::shudders:: I will not lose you to them. hehe j/k. Great job. Again with the rhyme. You really got that one down. Great job. Keep it up.