Reviews for Badger
Victim of the Wraith chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
I read this before but I'm reveiwing it now. It's amazing. I love it.
Deep Shadows chapter 1 . 10/8/2004
You say I am a good writer but I beleive you were simply looking in the mirror. My work would never compare to this. Keep up the awesome work, oh and btw "Thanks for reviewing"
Deep Shadows
Program36 chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
I loved how of parts of this twisted away. there were so many sentenses that seemed to pop up in a unusual way. Great poem all around. Would you be interested in co-writing a poem sometime?
Eirien chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
Again very impressive, riddly and difficult, leaves a lot of things for the reader to unravel. Your unusual images express that feeling of one's privacy being invaded by prying so-called friends really well. I especially like the image "I turn lucid for your amusement", that really sums it up. It is sad to have to experience such so-called care which turns out to be merely masked self-gratification.
livingonmemories chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
this is beautiful, i really like how it flows. good job jennie!
Locomotive Breath chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
that has to be one of the best of your work. it think (tell me if i'm wrong) that this is a bit different then your other pieces, yet i loved it all the same. i love how it's written in a storyish form, so when you read it the lines connect and flow. make sence? probably not lol. i love the part about dancing, the whole poem just painted a picture in my mind. is this symbolic? the last line seems so...and i dunno, but the lace seemed powerful in some sence. but i don't make sence lol. this was very sweet, and i quite liked the difference!
love it lots
~Triciznin lol, Traci
sirius chatham chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
Wow, that's an amazing poem. I really like it a lot.
Thanks for the flood of reviews by the way; the Saurman the White never occured to me (that's not why I wrote the poem, but it all makes sense now), and the poems that are by Athena are actually written by a girl I know who's nickname is Athena, it's not an alter-ego or anything. Some poems that mention Athena were written with her on my mind, and she asked me to post a few of her poems.
SO yeah, amazing poem. The wording and structure is amazing and it flows beautifully. I love it!
Keep reviewing!
Sirius Chatham
ps. definently on my favorites list