Reviews for My Delusionary Hell
SuperNovaNess chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
you spelled "face" wrong.
I'm KIDDING.
It 'twas gewd, and I get it!
...maybe.
Fabian Cortez chapter 1 . 9/14/2004
This is actually (albeit not quite as you wanted)very, very good as it is.
Impressive piece of poetry
KEEP WRITING!
F.C
I'd value your thoughts on some of my work, if your interested. My latest is called "Opus of Love" or perhaps you might enjoy "Ceremony" (not about weddings)See what you think. _