oh..the story of the poem in the beginning is really good...about meeting again at the place where they met...although i think you have failed to follow up in the end on that story line which is the main interest of the readers in the poem i guess...i was thnking of a bit more melnacholic ending...the first two stanzas are absolutely gorgeous...oh and pls, if you have the time, pls do review some of my poems..thanks...

truly yours...

Nice rhyme...I love the first four lines. Nifty poem.