|Reviews for In The Fields We Met|
| laughter at the funeral chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
oh..the story of the poem in the beginning is really good...about meeting again at the place where they met...although i think you have failed to follow up in the end on that story line which is the main interest of the readers in the poem i guess...i was thnking of a bit more melnacholic ending...the first two stanzas are absolutely gorgeous...oh and pls, if you have the time, pls do review some of my poems..thanks...
| Ria Mala chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
Nice rhyme...I love the first four lines. Nifty poem.