Reviews for Promise
Fobbster chapter 7 . 7/15/2015
How long have they known each other for?
Like, less than a week?
Errant chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
Looks interesting, but impossible to read.
jennshar67 chapter 4 . 3/20/2014
I think this story is so good but the layout was getting on my nerves but my loss I guess.
J. P. Alcott chapter 12 . 12/21/2012
I know it's been a (really, really, really long) while, but you should definitely slap the last chapter on here. And here's why: Aiden is an amazing protagonist with a lot of appeal (he's why I kept reading, as his non sequiturs and smart aleck remarks kept me giggling almost non-stop); Logan and other supporting characters are all nice and rounded and get their air time, which is really refreshing (drunk Nathan is a very close runner-up to Aiden); your format takes some getting used to, but once the reader's accustomed (which takes all of half a chapter, seriously), it goes really quickly and you get almost as much out of the intermittent descriptions and cut cues as from the dialogue (my personal favorite is the first glimpse we get of a sleeping - drooling - Aiden). Logan's feelings for Aiden seem a little rushed (I vaguely remember that being sort of explained by Logan? Perhaps?), but Aiden's reservations very nicely put the brakes on any heavy love story (I like the backstory for his promise, by the way). In conclusion, this story should definitely have an ending. Please? PS: Pardon the parentheses.
Guest chapter 12 . 7/24/2012
I love Anna if she was a lesbian I would so date her and watch yaoi together while reading fanfiction then listen to death metal while cuddling up with a book in the laundry room...
quayjahn chapter 12 . 7/8/2012
Where is the last chapter? Finally they kiss, I want to know, how it ends!
R.J Hastings chapter 12 . 8/14/2011
I wait with bated breath for the last chapter... I can honestly say that I believe that this story is pure brilliance. I don't run into many male authors for this sort of story but I am very glad that I found this gem. The fact that the story is played out like a movie script is highly refreshing and an interesting approach. It really spices things up. There were times where I couldn't differentiate dialogue from description, but overall I am in love with your characters, Logan especially. (I love me some Hugh Hackman lol) The scenes were described with very little words but I still get the sense that I'm actually watching a romantic comedy drama about two college boys who find love. Keep up the great work, love. :)
unorthodox chapter 12 . 4/7/2011
oh my goodness, this story is so funny, epic. It's sad that the next chapter will be the last. KEEPITUP.
choco addict chapter 12 . 9/30/2010
Hi! I know you haven't updated for ages, but I found your story some hours ago and I just finished reading all the chapters! It is one of the best things I've ever read! So sweet and original! The characters are awesome too. I seriously love them all! And finally Aidan and Logan are together!*tears of happiness* So please update the next chapter! You can't leave it here!
cloudwatcher chapter 12 . 8/2/2010
hello, I know you haven't updated this story in forever, but I just read all twelve chapters of this story in one go and felt the need to tell you that these 3 hours have been the best three hours of my day. Love the story and the stlye and the humor. It was great. Thank you!

rae2009 chapter 12 . 7/22/2010
no no no there's no MORE! you JUST got them together n...n...n there's no more? oh that's cold... :(
acrylla chapter 12 . 7/7/2010
Oh noes. please tell me this hasnt been abandoned? Ek
i-wish-i-had-wings chapter 12 . 10/1/2009
so original! i absoloutely love it
Crimsonoaks chapter 12 . 9/12/2009
i really like the entire format and tone of this story. great job! i hope you finish it since i'm jonesing for another chapter.
chickin'SOUP chapter 12 . 6/29/2009
this is laugh-out-loud hilarious! and exciting! and- what on earth could possibly have prevented you from posting the last chapter? 2005, my god!

..did you die?
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