Reviews for Rede
tari-morielen chapter 1 . 11/25/2004
Bide the Witches Law we must, in perfect love and perfect trust, Eight words the Wiccan rede fulfil, an harm ye none, do as ye will...I feel that this poem is an expansion without the metered poetry of the traditional, however the language gives it a much more ethereal flavour. I do believe though, that it needs to have some form of meter, in order to make it read more fluently. It comes across as a thought process, an internal prayer, or an instruction.
k. k. jeanne chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
i liked a lot of the word choice in this. and it was neat to read a poem under religion that wasn't about christianity! heh. but, in any event, wiccan is a beautiful religion and this was a very pretty poem. :)