Reviews for Beggar My Neighbour
yona chapter 1 . 10/6/2004
this is powerful. you wielded your words well. the pun "He's not a loser (or rather, he can't afford to be)" is an appropriate one and undermines the humour well. "That is the game of Beggar My Neighbour." would sound better in my opinion if you changed it to "This" though. My absolute favourite, other than Mrs Casanova. Write another perfect poem so i can add it to my favourites! ))
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
there is more under
that surface of a poem.
well done, ohmm!
i didn't quite get the gist of it,
but it sounds nice.
all in all,
dark and disturbing,
with perfect execution
of wording.
a good job.