Reviews for My Angel
c0nquestri0n chapter 1 . 10/31/2004
Excellent job using metaphors.
u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
I think the rhymes in this are good although a little awkward but who cares? Its a great poem and theres some great imagery you've built up. I really like it:D
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
ugh my stomach *feels queasy and cant spell that either* too much chocolate milk in one shot... hold on, brb... *runs away* *comes back* right, now to the poem after ive typed stuff u wont care for! hehe! i liked it. was very sweet and cute and all.
Fiontari chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
*hugs you tightly, sobbing into your shoulder*
I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
I'm not sure the rhyming pattern really works for this poem, but I liked the general mood of the poem - very sweet! :) The last stanza was really good, especially the last two lines. Well done!