|Reviews for The HuMan Prince|
| Dying Without Gackt chapter 29 . 8/21/2007
ah long time no review yet AGAIN. hahah. i still love hed. the fact that he's evil actually made me love him more. XD...i tend to like cunning, creepy characters. la la.
| Casey Drake chapter 50 . 7/9/2007
...whaddafrick? Oh, now he's the heir, I get it. Heir by the hair... I seriously need to quit the puns.
| Casey Drake chapter 49 . 7/9/2007
...Well, I COULD say that I expected it but then I'd be lying... meep.
It's The Taming of the Shrew meets Romeo and Juliet meets... I think I'll throw in Twelfth Night too, because of all the disguises.
| Nature's Glory chapter 50 . 7/9/2007
Gaah! August? September?
I can't bloody wait that long, itll ruin everything! You can't do this to me!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~!~~!~!~!~!~!~! *sob,cough*
Sigh, well I will say this - the ending was fantastically written; great personification particularly.
Hm, "The Razor's Edge of Conciousness" I'll haveta use that sometime.
Nice twist at the end, that was so cool, with Leonine having the white hair )
Lioness is a bastard aint he? Ah well, he will prolly be avenged upon in the sequel...which better come soon -.-
Remember when i said the other two chapters had the feel of a big momentous event? Well they did, and this chapter cleanly and perfectly finished the feeling. Twas not boring either, you had a lot of feeling goin on when Barth awoke. Nice bit!
When I read this chapter, so many timesd did my subconciousness say, "Oh."
Xyno's appearance was great, liked that - it fit just right
Everything you wrote worked out, everything that was supposed to be there you fit in, you didnt miss a beat. (shit! out of positive words!) erm, gawabaahh!...?
Can't wait for the sequel, if its as fun to write as you say!
Suprino Wrimo? Nano Wrimo? I'm stupid...ahh...'Merkan and Ive know idea wtf those are...Write a novel in 30 days? Sheesh, i cant write one in 3 bloody years...
Onward, then! Write your story quick and come back to your starving fans!
| Nature's Glory chapter 49 . 7/7/2007
I have to say, these last two chapters, 48 and 49, have consistently had the feeling of something big. I mean, you havent lost the feeling of "momentous event happening" at all. I know some professionals who can't do that right. Everything seems to be happening in slow-motion and its great!
The "attack" on Lord Orion, Rai's reaction to Barth, Linera's death. All of it, has been (what was the word you used for me before? Awesomeacity?). Its gonna be murder waiting for the last chapter! How is the company gonna react to this? Rah!
| Casey Drake chapter 48 . 6/29/2007
Fraik, Orion's a bard?
| Nature's Glory chapter 48 . 6/19/2007
I read my ass off working through forty eight chapters of long passages, and you give me the bad guy singing?
Lol jus kiddin, twas fun. So Orion is singing that famous ol song everybody and Kook's mother knows, yeah!
You better clear some things up good soon, or else -.-
| Nature's Glory chapter 47 . 6/19/2007
Evil, dirty, evil, dirty, evil, dirty trick! I love it!
Kill her? :D Evil and dirty and awesome!
My favorite chapter solely because of the last line: "You swore you would return to me my purpose, and indeed you have. She is right beside you. Now move aside and allow me to kill her."
You cant end this story in a few chapters! Theres so much more to go through!
| Nature's Glory chapter 46 . 6/19/2007
Oh damn, the plot...er thickens? Theres gotta be a better phrase than that...
You ought to be proud of the chapter, its really cool, and really head-turning! New developments like crazy - The Hu are technologically disenticed, Barth's a magic sprite, and his kids are subjected to genocide... ahem: WHOA!
Im having a flashback of Barth's temporary insanity on the boat...
| Nature's Glory chapter 45 . 6/18/2007
Pretty trippy umm...trip.
Hows this gonna end?
"It took a grinding step forward and the troop of brave soldiers moved back as one." This made me laugh ) Heehee
| Nature's Glory chapter 44 . 6/18/2007
The old man's description was a good example of your particular writing style, which is very unique (im not jus sayin that cuz its a good compliment either) and damn good too!
Humans but not Hu. Hm
Barth has been officially tooled by Xyno! :D A relief to us all, assuredly!
| Nature's Glory chapter 43 . 6/18/2007
You know, I think I had something negative to say (something like the chapters always end in Barth wimping out or whatever) but lost it once i started reading about Xyno. That was nifty!
Barth needs to be eaten by Xyno, and still live somehow. Meh.
| Nature's Glory chapter 42 . 6/18/2007
Ah, Darkness to darkness ) Awesome.
The way you switch from the names Kook and Mattif depending on the context - do you do that on purpose, cuz its great.
M, cool dragon fun!
| Nature's Glory chapter 41 . 6/17/2007
Great timing! This kind of decisive chapter was exactly what I think readers needed at this point in the story. It was for me anyway.
Its all coming together - the battle against Orion. Barth's soldier allies, his mummy coming to the rescue...
everybody needs to meet up now and finish him. )
Write on, right on!
| Nature's Glory chapter 40 . 6/12/2007
oh...Kook has lackeys now!
Rai is gonna have a big magic battle scene or something later on isnt she? isnt she!
Ugh, Im gonna have to continue reading again now, ill never stop...