Reviews for I don't know if I love you still
Darkgiftedchild chapter 1 . 3/20/2005
Oh this one struck home for me, I felt it to the core because I can relate to it so much. Great job I loved it.
kayla chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
Kiley, wow. I really like how you start each stanza with the line " I don't know if i love you still", it makes the poem all the more powerful and feeling. I love the way the ending just kind of sums everything up so perfectly. I loved this one.
gnimrodd chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
"All this time my once fervent passion
burned in the darkest corner of my heart;"
i love that line! how many times can smoebody do that, just tuck away their "love" for somebody else, keep it hidden away. and also, i don't know, all your poems discribe things to the exact.. i love it.. and this one, 'you'll break my heart. i'll merely be crushed anew' i love that line as well, sad, true, amazing..