Reviews for Beauty
One-Hand Clap chapter 1 . 4/20/2008
The imagery in this poem is just - wow. I loved it, truly did! Escpecially the line:

to billowing sails

It just gave me this really vivid mental image.

However, you didn't need the commas after every line, it weighted it down a tad.

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like a lover chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
i love your poetry, specially this one. it's so simple and pure and just lovely. another fav.
happy thing chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
'tis pretty