Reviews for Patch Of Sky
shea's surrender chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
dreamy? maybe in the beginning. But I notice that towards the end, the melancholy dreaming becomes harsher (3rd stanza excluded). Sorta brings into light the sadness lingering behind everything... and I'm probably reading too much into this...
Jina-chan chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
Wow that is one heck of a poem you got there. It is very beautiful and I could see everything going on in my mind. Well everything but the person I'd say this too...T-T;; But this is really good so keep it up! and R and r my works too!