|Reviews for Patch Of Sky|
| shea's surrender chapter 1 . 9/18/2004
dreamy? maybe in the beginning. But I notice that towards the end, the melancholy dreaming becomes harsher (3rd stanza excluded). Sorta brings into light the sadness lingering behind everything... and I'm probably reading too much into this...
| Jina-chan chapter 1 . 9/17/2004
Wow that is one heck of a poem you got there. It is very beautiful and I could see everything going on in my mind. Well everything but the person I'd say this too...T-T;; But this is really good so keep it up! and R and r my works too!