An epilogue would be nice.

Oh God, are u dead, please finish the story, it's been a long time since you updated. Your writing is really good.

This was such a nice read. I really wish there was more

I don't get the point of this flashback. What does it have to do with the dead baby and all? So now they are gonna be friend with Drew and he is gonna play a role in the accident of their baby? This story is just getting too convoluted for its own good. Cut the crap and just explain things so that the sory can move on in the present! It is getting annoying to go back and forth without anything being explained clearly about what seems to be the crux of the matter: that baby business.

Ok, that is so weird: they have been dating for at least 2 years and nobody know in their school? Even after they had sex and all, they avoid each other at school? That doesn't make sense. Also, stretching the flashbacks for so long seems like a stalling tactic. We should know by know what actually happened. The all revealing wil be so anticlimatic after dragging it so long.

Ok, could we have less riddles and more clear explanations, please? Cause after so many chapters hitting at their "past", the bomb about their dead baby is dropped but there are still annyting unclear things. Their discussion was so unclear it is annoying. Nothing is explained. And then back to the sexual push and pull. It is really annoying.

Hmmm... This story started interesting and now is veering full on soap opera...in a bad way. 1st, the constant circling around the big elephant without explaining clearly what it is is just tiring. At chapter 8, the flashbacks have only told us that they used to be in love and then broke up dramatically, like it was this life altering shit. The constant back and forth is just annoying: he stares, ogle her body, she yell, and is angry, we don't know why, be it is said that they hate each other...WTF. They act like they are still 14 year old ! And now, the biggest WTF: they had a baby together who died and all ! Really? How old are they by the way? So now the story turns tragic and it still doesn't make sense: so how come they have all this history and at the beginning behave like they are having a fucking childish nemesis bullshit : ' I so hate you""No I hate you more" "Oh, by the way do you remember we lost a child"! This shit is just tiring and annoying. At this point, something got to give: the constant push and pull is just stupid

I just found this story. Please update. I it's been year but this is too fantastic a story to be abandoned. Please update soon, pleeaaasssee!

Love it !

This is soooo Great its freakin great! Love,loss,heartbreak, and even some action! I truely can NOT wait to see whats next! You do Black girls justice in this story its really believeable! AND its so very emotional and sexy. True LOVE never DIES...Beautiful. please update as soon as you can!

when it all said and done, can you please let them be together,and if they can become a family again.

Please finish it~

Please, please, please~

I had read this story at an earlier date and I just wished that when I came to check on it, that something would have been updated. It saddens me to see that it hasn't been but I am really hoping that you come back to complete this and that you can one day finish their troublesome love story

o.0 I know I am so late on this, but please post! :]

I love this story. I love how they have a history and you take us back in time to relive their love they once had. I love how Celina is taking this slow but I do wish she would let up a little bit. I'm hoping for a slip up and they end up making love. Your story keeps getting better and better and I'm dying for more. Waiting patiently for the next update..