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Reviews for
Beaten
shea's surrender
chapter 1 .
9/19/2004
Gotta love the lines
"you'll die a hero
if you make an advance"
Very hopeless-sounding. It really appeals to a person's world view, either pointing out the flaws or further enforcing it.