|Reviews for The Real Me|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 2/8/2006
Whew,—found a poem I had no comment on,
It seems a little time at lunch makes friends,
For such a courtesy extended grace,
That as we read we learn so much about,
Those changes that mutate another's life,—
I cannot tell you how great are my thanks,
That you should take the time to read my works,
And always with a nice tone say something,
That leaves a little smile that lingers on,—
I have seen the evolution of you,
In words written on many pages now,
And wish you always the greatest of joy,
For your consistency and gentleness,—
Rare gifts to find in any life these days.
p.s. Thank you for you thoughts and comments. They are always appreciated. p.p.s I can only comment/post a poem if you write more! m
| JC-Saved-Me chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
Are you sure you don't know me? lol it's like most of the things you write, i can relate 2 so much! Well anyway, this was good! I liked it very much!
| alors chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
Think: If you hide your real self from someone, aren't you NOT trusting that person?
Very truthful, and nice. Keep it up.
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
omg im so going to bed by 10! im so bloody tired! and how do i keep falling so far behind in reviews? ah well. cool poem! i like it!
| innocent shadows chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
hey, i loved that poem
it didn't LOOK emotional and when i read it, it was totally different.
twas so pitiful for the me in the story,
nice theme too
im 'favouriting' this.
| Pissed Off Poet chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
awesome poem! Yeah, I can so relate. Thx for the review for my latest.