|Reviews for On the inside|
| a-palm-full-of-stars chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
I really like this poem of yours. Especially how you started out with "and," because it makes it seem like it wasn't the begining. Nice job, and keep writing!
| Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
very deep and well written, totally exquisite piece!