|Reviews for Pretty Pretty Girl|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
I chase after minutes, hours and weeks,
Lost in life's wilderness of time and space,
Hunting red heart's meaning running swiftly,
Through memory's tangled dry underbrush,
Where spark from lightning's fire has not yet touched,
Or Zephyr blown hot conflagration's crown;
I search for cyphers lost amidst dense groves,
Where sunlight at times cathedral streams down,
Through canopies woven densely in heigth,
That would deflect my straightest arrow's flight,
Seeking bright plumage of exotic bird,
To decorate my headress warrior,
With magic and deep incantation's strength,
So I can then go find my enemy,
To kill and flail; and, display on my wall,
His skin or head that demonstrates my skill,
And with it bring the sorcerer's true gift,
Unlocking heart of She that waits for me,
My maiden love that understands all this.
| grim-dreamer chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
Oh pretty pretty girl
how would you feel if I murdered you
because I want your perfect tan (-)?
Quite evil, quite evil.
(And cheers for your review - I'm sorry you had to send it through twice...)
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
hahahaha! what an ending! LOL!
| William Ironclad chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
Cool. I like it. That's an interesting concept. Bears get people skin. Hm. Pandas get people skin.
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King
| ApplesCM -Too lazy too sign in chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
I love the ending. Very, very true! Nice job!