Reviews for Abandoned Angel
Madkat-Z chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
Tells a very interesting tale. Well, at least that is what I think. I really like the first 16 lines. It’s a little hard to read your format though, since it is doubled space. Perhaps you should get rid of the double spacing and instead of having just one big stanza divided stanza up. It will make it easier to read and will make it not seem as long.