Reviews for Good bye
amisi0099 chapter 1 . 10/12/2008
/this one makes me feel sad inside...
Sosei13 chapter 1 . 9/28/2005
Woa...that was great. I wish I could write like that. But I am no poet. Nope. Ok...I read something else of yours...and decided that I wanted to read more of your writing. Since you are a great writer...yup...ok..bye. Much Love!Sosei
TheDevilsAngel09 chapter 1 . 6/20/2005
another amazing poem, very sad and emotion, i love how in this line

"i hear death's horse's hooves"

wow, just the imagery of the horse and hooves amazing. get desctiptive as usual.

Laura
Mistress-Nightmare chapter 1 . 5/24/2005
wow, this is really strong and deep. I seriously love how you can rhyme and not make it sound forced. Thats hard for many people to do. I like the last 3 lines.
scudcrow chapter 1 . 10/6/2004
Very familial, by the way you've phrased the "Death's horse's hooves" and "I'm short of breath now...every one is subtle," you defnititely take the "pain" away.
Out-Of-Reality chapter 1 . 9/21/2004
That was so pretty yet sad but happy at the end. The emotions were so well expressed that I couldn't decide which one. It was just amazing!