I love your story "The Fantasy Within"! It's so well written and funny! .

Keep up the great work!

good good good! keep it going... lol... dont make me wait so long next time... lol... i'm sorry about the name... he's a good guy.. i'll change it... didnt even realize it.. lol... sry... now, write more! when u have time of course.. lol

beeky... there are STILL no more chapters yet... luv ya.. WRITE MORE!

BEEKY! there are no more chapters yet! hurry up girl! lol. i luv u...hehe
look me up... read my fable... from junior year... lol.. it's bad.. but i'm starting something else that i might be able to follow through with... hehe... just watch for it. and WRITE MORE STORY! lol

Very nice chapter. I think this is going to be very interesting later in chapters. I like the beginning where you described the grandmother's cottage and horses. I love Barry Manilow's Mandy, it's a great song. Hehe, sorry, got off topic. Anyways, it's very interesting so far. Please come by and read some of my stories.