Reviews for Beautiful Mahogany Brown Sugar
Clouden3 chapter 1 . 10/27/2004
(Blush) Damn, that's highly um...insatiable. I like the rhythm of this and the wording. Great work right here. Whew, very steamy work as well.
negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
i like the idea of
sweetness you focus on
throughout the poem.
gives those who have
never loved like that
a warm fuzzy feeling.
and we now know that
even though there's heartbreak,
there's also true love,
and it's beautiful.
a terrific descriptive figurative
poem with nice imagery.
wonderful work.
-kismet.
Raven Gray chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
wonderful absolutely wonderful i luv this song wish i could hear it on the radio it'd be awesome great job as always! much luv