|Reviews for Disrespectful|
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
wow! very powerful. i guess i am disrespectful because of the things that i do. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. God loves you and so do I!
| Clouden3 chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
Nice. Thanks 4 ur reviews. I especially appreciate this poem because it's something I'm forced to witness practically everyday. Insightful and important. Great job.
| negligible fictional force chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
oh yeah, i like it.
lovely nephew you have there.
it's a nice poem
with a moral.
it'd be great for kids,
and great as a rap,
and simply great.
we should all read this
and learn something.
| Kenishiro chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
This is one hell of an excellent job, i agree with you on that. here in asia, respect to elders is one of our priority. even today i dare not to raise my voice to people older than me, albeit strangers... great piece of poetrt!
| Raven Gray chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
good discussion n poem much luv