|Reviews for Unmarred|
| Seeker of the Way chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
People never say what they really mean. Frieds will tell everybody ELSE how you suck, and lovers will compliment you until the flaws they look for are found and suddenly that is all they see of you.
But, you said something new here. Bravo! It sounds like "love your enemy" territory? I wrote something like that in An Angel Demonized *shudders, that poem still surprises me that I wrote it ... AND put it up for others to see -hides- *
| Eagle Seance chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
hmm... kind of masochistic, but effective use of language all the same. excellent descriptions, excellent work!
(i especially liked how you ended the poem with that final verse)
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
Bring you knives... your
I dont htink I understood it, but its very powerful and wellwritten
| philoslove chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
Lovely in a morbid way, I like the "As you sift through my secrets
And beat me with my faults." Sigh, I don't have much of that poetic thing in me these few weeks, the exams perhaps... but anyway, this was lovely in a powerfully morbid way. I kept thinking of a doll being scarred by some hydrolchloric acid or somthing...
| XX Bleeding Crystal XX chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
This poem is so morbidly delightful. Freakingly good; keep it up, you're great!
| Blondeggman chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
WOW! Lindzoid! That was one GRAET poem. (I kno I spelled it wrong...) I hearthchu!
| Not Like The Other Girls chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
grotesque and beautiful at the same time.I love it.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
You have soo much talent ! I await your next poem or fic. with open arms ! )