I know it’s been a few years since you finished this story so I’ll keep it short, but I loved it so much I wanted to review anyways. I ended up getting pretty attached to the characters, and I liked that the fight with Lucius dragged on—Arin didn’t just defeat him and then stay on Earth for a while (I’ve seen that in other works), the plot was happening while there was this threat looming above them. There’s more that I liked about the story that I can’t put into words, but it was super good and I’m really glad I got the chance to read it!

OMG! This story was absolutely brilliant. I loved each and every thing about it! Thank you so much for sharing it with us! Has to be one of the best stories here on FictionPress.

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Where do i begin? i have no idea, i love every bit of this story even if it did give me a few late sleepless nights and bags under my eyes. This is one of the best story's I've read by far, i think it should be a book and be sold i would buy it, it could even be a movie or a manga. i love how you developed the characters and how their love grew with each chapter, i would love to read a sequel if there was one just so i can see what happens to the characters how Arin fits in the world, how they start living maby get married what would there kids be like. well i guess all good things must come to an end thanks for this wonderful story

I reaaaaaally enjoyed this story, it's been the cause for my procrastination for the past few weeks ;P

I noticed that in a way this story reminded me of D. , without the dna part... and the life style you described reminded me a lot of Japan, even though the story was set in some country in the USA, so I got kind of confused, but it's all good!

If you really think about being published eventually you'll have a faithful reader in me X)

Now I'll check out some of you're others stories and procrastinate some more!

this was an excellent story, very well written and a great story i have read so far. great job.

This story was amazing...I don't know why you don't have more reviews. It was written really well and you portrayed everyone's emotions just right. I'm always awed when writers create worlds of their own and you definitely did that with Arin and the Deslyan and how the 'angels' were actually the bad guys. Great job and I hope you get more reviews for this.

Loved the story. Normally I review each chapter when I read something, but lately I seem to be too wrapped up in what I read to write so many reviews. Ah well. The final review is always the most fun anyway. :) I have to say, reading this was extremely enjoyable. I loved the conflict and the characters. The twist on angels was also interesting. The arrogance of them, and the Deslyans was slightly amusing. Well, at least Arin's arrogance was amusing. Jessie was a sweet character. The innocence made her a lovely remedy to Arin's harsh attitude. All in all, I had fun reading it. I think I might turn my attention to Advocate next. There are a few other stories that I want to read, but very likely I'll return eventually to 'harrass' you again. Lol. Happy writing!

-K chan

wow this is so amazing! i love this story! its s creative and original and you write so well. i love your writing style by the way.

this story seemed well paced and the time changes were very clear and there was little confusion. your creativity is astounding! the culture you created for Arin and his people was well thought out and you wrote it clearly. very good job

I really enjoyed reading this story and cant wait to read your other stuff! GREAT JOB AGAIN!

Aw... that was so cute! I cried in the second-to-last chapter when Arin left. It was just so sad! I absolutly LOVED this story! Amazing job!

Peace,

Bubbly Girl

P.S. This story is definently going on my favorites list!

Love it...it's awesome...really. I cannot say any more because I simply can;t...lol...i have to admit, this is the second time I read it and believe it or not...this was my first story reading on fictionpress.

I wasn't a member at that time so i couldn't review. And now I found it again!

THAT was by far the most AH-MAZING story I have ever truley read. It's such a shame its over. I want to cry now. Keep up the great work. I honestly mean everything. This story is so the freaking best.

this first chapter really grabs my attention. it was totally well done

oh my gosh! This was so AMAZING! I laughed, I cried, and got mad, and was happy, and I loved this story. So different and diverse, making me think about what could be happening right under my nose. I absolutely loved it! Thanks for putting it up here.

Wow. This is the best story I've ever read. And I mean it...

:)

*sighs dreamily

now if only that could happen to me. dammit.

TWO MONTHS! IT TOOK U TWO MONTHS TO DO THIS!

impossible.

gar.

i loved this story. yup.