Reviews for Hanging High
freeyourself chapter 1 . 2/12/2005
thats a great poem, it reminds me of those poor accused "witches" being hung for crimes they did no commit in the olden days. thanks for the review too
LostInReality chapter 1 . 1/9/2005
Pretty good! J'aime it a lot.
graffiti-skies chapter 1 . 12/15/2004
the ending was just amazing...good work! love the way it flows together...
Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 12/14/2004
I LOVE THIS! Oh, and about the dream I had, you think it would be someone I like, but I really don't know who it is. Maybe it's a fusion of all the guys I like...dunno. Tootles!
Winged Lyon chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Hey! Nither oh's worked but hey. um... yeh. Design diary. I TOLD U SKOOL!umm. i cannot tell u my mob number cos PPL might ABUSE it. umm...yeh... good poem. keep it up!
philoslove chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
The imagery of using a piece of string to life line and the shaky balance between life and death is powerful, to emphasise that soon the string might break, and the girl will be prey to Death. The whole poem flows very naturally. Good rhythm. If it were to be translated into prose, it'll make a poignant piece.
godsjoke1 chapter 1 . 10/5/2004
ya your right it is like mine but mine was after a dream i had
Crazy-Word-Painter chapter 1 . 9/30/2004
That was so sad... but really good. It would be a good story.