Reviews for Crazy, Beautiful
Black-Passion chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
i like this, especially the first stanza, and how you slip your name in. you may want to watch your syllables, though. keep a fairly consistent pattern to help it flow, but other than that I think it's really good.
u-will-never-know chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
Aww thats really nice, It all flowed perfectly...great job! :D
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
ah wow... ur so good at this stuff!
bayshel-wass chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
Nice poem :)
I liked the pun of 'Hawke,' and the figurative language overall. It flowed nicely. Only change I might suggest is changing 'silken kisses' to 'silky kisses.' I think that might sound better.