Reviews for Vow
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 9/23/2004
Hey you bastard, leave me all this time with the kids and we're at home starving and i'm working my ass off to support them? LMAO just kidding.. where ya been love! P
I think this is definitely one of your better poems. I still think you need more metaphors and such to back it up but you explained the emotionals well and I could honestly feel it... not bad at all. Short but sweet.
Jenna xoxo