Reviews for The Hopeless Romantic Trilogy Part I: A Rant
Renzie chapter 1 . 9/30/2005
OH MAH GAWD. OH MAH GAWD. This is SO good. I couldn't tear my eyes away. Damn. I must read more. No time to review! Be back later 3
Nickster25 chapter 1 . 7/12/2005
its good but i dont get it

i mean 1 minute they both dont want a relationship then theyre dating each other and then hes in love. it just seems like they want something they dont want
goddess of advices chapter 1 . 4/14/2005
uh, is this a real story? if it is, i recommend u to tell her. Even if this isn't a real story, it is important to know that if u feel something towards somebody, u should tell them. I have a quote:"If you ever wanted something really badly, let it go and see what happens. If it comes back to u, than it's urs forever. If it doesn't come back to u, then it was never urs to begin with."Hope this helps
retaliation chapter 1 . 3/24/2005
i like rants. its awesome _ rant some more.
Rocco chapter 1 . 2/16/2005
Hm...interesting problem presented in this story and I like how it makes you think. I liked the detail of the story, I really could picture these characters in my mind. I think it also does an excellenct job of showing how hopelessly ironic love truly is.
Lou xxx chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
Ooh that's a tricky situation lol... Please continue!
HgBookworm chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Great first part. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.-HgBookworm
rukki chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
Well i say you take the chance and tell her. I mean you don't want any regrets right? I think a girl would really hate it if the ex came back and asked for forgiveness and then he tells me he loves me. It might not sound sincere. Or perhaps i am too harsh. You have a typo. "He[r] hair was pulled back in a little pony tail" Your qs is more like a rhetorical qs. But i am sure it goes both ways. When i first saw this i thought it would be another "Nice guys finish last" story. but it isn't. It is quite realistic and it is a struggle that many of us have to go through.
Zelia Theb chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
Really good narrative fic! The topper is the unanswerable question posed at both the beginning and the end.