Reviews for 11
HgBookworm chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Great song. It seems like you're really missing this person and that you have major feelings for them. Your song is a perfect representation of that.-HgBookworm
Zelia Theb chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
Can feel the pain pouring out of this one - and the lack of a repetitive chorus is so poetic in itself. It's like, the person doesn't want to have the hurt repeated.
Andrea Lotte chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
It's pretty good! For some reason it reminds me of Avril Lavigne...I don't know why. I think it's porbably because of the "shower hour" part, because she uses those two words to rhyme in "My World"
My sister just turned her on! better get back to listening to Avril...
Great song! Keep writing!