|Reviews for My Freakish Little World|
| Alley Rhodes chapter 1 . 6/4/2005
I liked it alot! keep it up (srry, not good at reviews!)
| swtdreamz101 chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
i guess we all have our own little worlds that we wish to keep from others, yet is the best place to vent- hehe, nice poem
| Black-Passion chapter 1 . 11/18/2004
i htink the stanzas should be a little longer, just so theres more space between the repetition; also: variation is always (well, almost always) better than repetition.
i htink you should describe your world more. why is it freakish? are their cool creatures in it? (or something to that extent) anyhoo, the point is: we want to *see* htis world, afterall, this is why we clicked on this poem to begin with.
| suey and liuey chapter 1 . 9/28/2004
'My freakish little world,
I hope to grow,
Out of this hole,'
i thought that it sounded a bit weird... but maybe thts just me! otherwise its not bad. keep writing
| Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
Odd, and strangely twisted, but I know exactly what you're talking about. Until I did so, I could feel no peace. Thanks for your review on Ocean Waves.
| Lady Julianne chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
It would be better if there was some description of the freakish little world other than odd, weird, small and cold. But otherwise, good message.