|Reviews for Someone To Love Me|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/21/2006
Bound up in heart's desire to love and care,
We stand in awe at life's dire storms and stare,
¿Did not our soul its toll pay in full fare,
When vulnerable we gave all to share?
¿How came we to this heart rending affair,
When we alone our peace to this compare?
¿What led us to our deepest thought raw bare,—
To words so sharp as knives that cut and pare?
Yet, we are richer for those moments dear,
That brought us harmony beyond mind's fear,
With nights when moon hid and all stars shone clear,
While cold Autumn zephyrs blew golden sere,
Past horizons that our bonfire could peer,
Past group's cozy gossip with eyes that leer,
Past into vast darkness with no seer,
Where only death does rend and love shear.
| angel of sorrow n darkness chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
hey I SO love this very good work one of my faves defintely
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
i like this. a lot. i know the feelings and everything. truly from the heart. also, as a reply to your review to me; i know hes not worth beating up. my friends want to do so to him but im against it. i mean, i goes against everything i believe in...
| Shadowz the Silver Wolf chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
I like this poem. It's every well written and it strikes home to me.