Reviews for The Raindancer
wolfiel chapter 1 . 2/20/2006
Wow... that was really sweet. The way you worded the poem seemed a bit foreign but still brilliant in its own way to me. Nice..
Katrina Gabrielle chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
oo... wow. I've read many things on here... never something as uniquie, beautiful, and simply magestic as this. It's a sad story... and it's wonderful. Amazing... truly...*favorites*
Different Definitions Of Storm chapter 1 . 8/11/2005
...Wow. This was really unexpected- the whole concept of a girl dancing to ease pain and sorrow. Some beautiful imagery here.

The poem flowed nicely but some of the rhymes seemed a little forced to me, but I'm picky. P The rest of the words chosen were fit in very well, though. In any case, this is a great poem! D Keep writing. )
Sarah-Brighteyes chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
This is one of the best pieces I have read on fictionprss yet. Such beautiful imagery and the right amount of sappiness. I could feel the girl twirling as she wished for rain amongst other things. Very sacred piece...beautiful. Your stanzas flowed and no awkward breaks. Very nice. Bravo to you.
aflyingmachine chapter 1 . 5/14/2005
wow o.o;; awesome poem..i love dancing in the rain
waitandhope chapter 1 . 5/10/2005
That...that...wow.

That went on my favorites list.
Jengafa chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
There are some things that don't rhyme in here. And the ending didn't seem to actually sound like one, it didn't have that finalizing 'tone'.

But other than that, beautiful, if not redundant.
Earthbound Angel 49 chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
you're a great writer! i love this poem, the rhyme, the ryhtem, it all fits.

EA
Wolfie Star26 chapter 1 . 12/2/2004
i have to say this is aweosme, just like i was when i was kid, only i danced pretty much on the roof of the apartment building or in the park down the street, since i lived in new york city. anyway, i'd lvoe to beta something for you if you still need a beta. not that you really need one, since i hardly ever find anything wrong with your work. keep up the good work.
Gemini Angel chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
This poem is amazing, the words just flow-like rain;) i truly love your poem~LuvGem
Dirty Transylvanian chapter 1 . 11/19/2004
Nice. Cool! Wish I could write poetry like that. You're intelly-gent.

Tee hee!

That was possibly the sweetest poem I've ever read (while having a few minor glitches). Wayttago!
Islandbreeze chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
This almost seemed like it could be a song it had such a nice rythm to it, and I liked all the fleshed out descriptions.
Sharpes chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
Hehe, that was quite a nice poem.
Diamond Fire chapter 1 . 10/20/2004
I loved this poem. When I write poetry, I prefer to work with free verse, but I love the rhythm of the poem. The poem paints such a vivid image in my mind.
Lan Jian chapter 1 . 10/15/2004
wow, this is a really nice poem. I'm definetly faving this poem! _
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