Reviews for Relief
Flashes of Light chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
This was good, straight to the point and very emotional. The last line was lke the final blow, and a shock to me. Well done.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
wow.. powerful end there... tahnks for your review.. I posted the poems in span. if ya wanted to read them
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
wow, Aaron. Those are some powerful words my friend! i hope your friend doe read this, cuz it shows you care. great job!
love
amber
mizu no kokoro chapter 1 . 9/24/2004
wo... another suicide poem
i liked the poetic devices u used in this though
good job