|Reviews for Wandering and Wondering|
| XxX-Outcast-XxX chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
Really good poem! I Love the rhyming sequence and the imagery! Keep up the god work!
| Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
I LOVED THE ENDING! It went so nicely the whole time and the ending just topped it off.
| Walk Backwards chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
I liked it, your nature imagery is beautiful and you have a good rhythm going, but it was hard to follow. Mostly, I think because it's such a long contiuous block of text. If that's what you wanted, then all power to ya, but it makes the poem harder to read and stay focused that way... maybe if you stretched it our or broke it up some?
| Free-Writer chapter 1 . 11/1/2004
Wow this was very deep and touching. I myself have thought like this too. I do wonder if we will ever find the "true meaning of being alive"
| Nanners chapter 1 . 10/29/2004
I think a good deal of us are searching for that. The true meaning of being alive, that is. I guess we'll never actually find it, but it's so fun to wonder, don't ya think? I just can't imagine that knowing the answers to these questions would be half as fun as wondering the answers to them.
But, that's just mean rambling. About the poem; I really like it. (If I didn't, I wouldn't have reviewed!)
| Islandbreeze chapter 1 . 10/25/2004
Great job- everything flowed really well and it had a nice style and voice that stayed throughout the whole poem. My favorite lines were
"Dreams that go on/for all eternity,
never crossed the line/between illusions and reality"
| Nothing Profound chapter 1 . 10/16/2004
That's really nice...and thank you for your review, by the way...
| F-Core chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
You have such a nice writting style, the flow is so soothing in this poem. I liked it a lot:)
| Raya Dronaile chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
beautiful and sad. a very deep thoughtful poem. well done. I liked it a lot.
| A.D Williams chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
This poem flows beautifully. Also, the final line obtains such POWER! Wonderful Writing Thank you so much for the new reviews!
-pokes & squishings
| An-Author-At-Heart chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
Whoa... that was GOD! It was so deep, so metaphorical and had so much feeling. I loved it! It was written very well, the writing style was so good! What you depicted and how you write everything is so good my heart skipped a beat. I read your bio, I play the flute too (well, when I was in band... don't really play it anymore...)
PS. Thank you SO much for the review!
| Blissfully Unaware chapter 1 . 10/9/2004
This is beautifully written.
Btw, I love Do As Infinity too! Especially "Fukui Mori" the Inuyasha theme. Awesome. Okay, that was really off-topic! Oh, and before I forget, thanks a bunch for the reviews! I really appreciate it!
~All the best from one who is Blissfully Unaware
| stiffler2 chapter 1 . 10/1/2004
| lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
wont let me sign on but this is my username. great poem... has a really nice rhythm to it and the way you fit the lines together really makes sence. nice use of questions and metaphors. really good stuff! keep it up
| silverquill212 chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
*teardrop* This poem echoes my feelings of late. My heart was broken for the first time a week ago, and I'm still healing and trying to rediscover who I am. I can understand the feelings described all too well. Your poem is a true inspiration, an all-too-accurate description of a feeling nobody should have to surrender to.