I take it you were one of those kids that wished day after day that your school blew up so you wouldn't have to go there anymore? Puh-lease. Trust me, seeing how distorted your views on education are, how pathetic your poetry is, and how lousy of an overall author you are, I think school would do you WONDERS. But hey, daddy-o, you don't have to listen to a beatnik like me, go on and slide through school without learning from or appreciating anything it has to offer you. Because when that's done, it'll be you flipping our burgers while we're off being successful, you square.

This is a good story. You really have a way with words. Keep it up.

Jo Madden (Hobbit of Doom)

Did your English teacher like this one? There are certainly many falacies of the education system, but I think as a whole American kids take their education for granted. You'll understand when you're not actually PART of the system.

Interesting...morbid in a funny way. Your rhythym is a bit choppy, which you might want to fix. But other than that, it's great. Thanks for putting me on your favorite author's list!

-Faye