Reviews for On The Bus
jdilorenzo chapter 1 . 12/11/2009
I'm not going to try to analyze or understand this, but it was beautiful.
Jo The Pirate chapter 1 . 11/2/2004
I loved this.
I think it has some deeper meaning, I just don't know what it is yet. I loved it though. You have a great talent for writing, very descriptive, and every paragraph draws you in.
Great job.
- Jo
girl chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
"Those who drew their own pictures were castaways."
Thats gorgeous.
The whole thing is beautiful.
your amazing, dear.
Your talent is given to you to use. Keep going with it, and focus.
Wicked Saint chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
Okay, I won't pretend I understood what this piece is all about, but I must say, it's not as bad as you say/think it is. I actually liked it. Random works like this sometimes appeal to my reading senses you know...of course you don't know..I just told you now (lol)
I take the bus sometimes. Of course, I don't think things like the girl in this piece do. Kinda too much thinking for my brain...it would probably make my head ache. I think things that are a lot different from such notions.
Ah, yes, the things I think! (chuckles)Let's not go that way. (_)
You're an impressive writer. I'm actually jealous because your works are deep. They're really good and it actually scrambles one's mind to think a little more or look at what's the real message of your essays/stories.
And they're really good.