|Reviews for After 8:25|
| Oath chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
The last to lines of the las to stanza's rhyme; i think the poem would flow alot better if this kind of structture was repeated. Nonetheless, disturbingly done.
| Mayaj chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
Kind... of... nothingish... comperatively, I mean. Seems rather vacant, no? You can do better.