Reviews for The Bigger Picture
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
Excellent flow and movement in this. Vivid descriptions as well. If you discard the details the bigger picture is usually more cloudy.
Galadh Niniel chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
Lovely and very true. Often we tend to ignore the small things and dream of the "bigger picture" or work towards it, but in fact our destiny is decided in all the small details that make up our life. You have expressed this in a wonderful way, very lyrically and beautifully with the touching and haunting little details you mention.
katiebuggie chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
I like this poem a lot. It made me think. Beautiful work!
hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 10/24/2004
good rhythm for one thing and i like the way you've put it. nice imagery. good work there P
Rei chapter 1 . 9/29/2004
nice detail! Well thats what you wanted right?
saphiremoon chapter 1 . 9/25/2004
wow! it definently flows!